I am so happy because I won a Rainbow Hitmonlee so I am making a contest.I will be making a story making contest,you guys need to make a story of your own.You can make 2 if you want.The story need to be a pokemon story and I need to be one of the characters.You could put your name in the story too but it must be an interesting story.Remember only pokemon story,if it is other story not pokemon,you will be eliminated.There is no limit of how many people will be entering,just do your best.No copying peoples work,if you do,you will be disqualified.

Prizes:

CursedWooper

Leader Board:Ranstormer

Contest will end on the 30th June 2012,good luck to all

Onc upon a time the end lol

Reversed for #3 Post spot.I will come out with a two page story - *Just kidding*

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Very nice:)

how many tries do we have?

My first try

Characters

Hero Team
Jarenn - Main
Ranfeo - Friend of Jareen

Villain Team
Giratina - 1st in charge
Micloid - 2nd in charge
Rayquaza - Assistant of Giratina
Darkrai - A leader
Danter - A leader
Dazeroin - A leader

The Revenge of the Destroyed

Chapter 1 - Beginning

One day Jarenn went with his started torterra into the jungle in search of new pokemon. He was searching for pokemon and suddenly found a treecko and he went after it to catch it. He kept on running and then treecko raced him. Still Jarenn kept on running and then finally he tripped and then fell down. He felt that there was a very hard stone under the ground.
He said, " Ouch!! That hurt badly. Oh no my leg is bleeding, now what will i tell mom. She will surely scold me.
Then he saw a small piece of steel and then the started removing the mud next to it. He kept on digging and then he could not remove all the mud cause his leg was bleeding very badly. He started limping to his house and then applied some ointments and then told Ranfeo about the place.

Chapter 2 - Jarenn and Ranfeo

After a few days Jarenn and his friend Ranfeo went to that place and then they saw that a huge amount of mud had been removed. They saw a big piece of steel lying there. They looked around it and then suddenly Ranfeo found a button and then clicked it. Then suddenly a door opened next to the button and they entered into it. They kept on walking straight and finally saw another door. They opened it and then went into it. Then a shadow ball landed just in front of Ranfeo. He looked up and then saw a mightyena and it was using shadow ball on them. Then suddenly Jarenn took out his Torterra and then Ranfeo took out his Charizard.
Jarenn shounted, " Torterra use Earthquake"
Ranfeo Shouted, "Charizard use Flame Througher"
The pokemon used their attack and then mightyena fainted. Both of them sighed in relief. Then they returned their pokemon. They continued travelling and suddenly a thick fog came before them and they got separated.

Chapter 3 - Jarenn

Jarenn went through and then suddenly a big pokemon fell before him and he got amazed. He went next to the pokemon and it was hurt. Jarenn then suddenly took some portions and healed that pokemon. After some time the fog cleared and Jarenn saw that it was a Dialga and next to it was a lucario and a mewtwo. Dialga stood up and started talking with Jarenn.
Dialga asked, " What is your name and what are you doing here?"
Jarenn replied, "My name is Jarenn. I came here by accident, actually my friend........(Jarenn stopped talking and looked around him and he could not see Ranfeo)."
Dialga asked, "What happened? Why did you stop? Is there anything wrong?"
Jarenn replied, "My friend Ranfeo was also with me here but now i can't find him."
Dialga told, "Don't need to worry about that, I will send mewtwo to look for him.(Then he told mewtwo to search for a human)"
Jarenn replied, "Thanks, and by the way why were you hurt and can you explain to me what is going on here?
Dialga told, "Ok i will tell you what happened. Actually many years(over 10,000 years) before there used to be many pokemon and we used to live here peacefully. Suddenly a few pokemon became bad and wanted to rule the pokemon. They were-
Giratina
Rayquaza
Darkrai
Danter
Micloid
Dazeroin
These pokemon were very bad and they were very tough to beat. They grew very strong and then they were almost unbeatable and then a few pokemon rose to fight them. After days of war against them the Dialga and Palkia of that time sacrificed their lives and sealed those pokemon away. Nowthe seal had been broken somehow and they escaped and are now again there. Even though i am sure that you are not familiar with 3 of those pokemon but when you see them you will understand. I and Palkia along with Zekrom and some other pokemon went to battle them but they were very powerful and they had defeated us and those pokemon that fought against them would had been destroyed. Some pokemon did not want me and Palkia to get hurt and sent us a bit far from them but they found us and tracked us down. Now i and Palkia got separated. Then a few pokemon attacked us and then i got hurt and then you healed me."
Jarenn was sad when he heard this story and then told Dialga that he would help them in their war.
Jarenn asked, "Are there any more pokemon remaining?''
Dialga replied, "We have a few pokemon on our side with Palkia and there was only a mightyena to beat."
Jarenn smiled and replied, " I and Ranfeo together had beated it.''
(Then Jarenn stood up)
Jarenn asked, " Can you become my pokemon in this battle?"
Dialge agreed and then Jarenn used his masterball and caught Dialga. Then he went and lucario showed him a way to go to the place where the evil pokemon were ruling. Jarenn followed and then went into the other place.

Chapter 4 - Ranfeo

On the other side Ranfeo was walking and when the fog got cleared he looked around and could not find Jarenn.
He shouted, "Jarenn where are you? Jarenn."
Suddenly he saw a lucario and it came next to him and told him to keep quite and took him near to Palkia. Palkia saw him and they started talking.
Ranfeo said, " WOW!! A Palkia..."
Palkia asked, "Who are you and what are you doing here?
Ranfeo replied, "I am Ranfeo. I came here by a piece of steel. I pressed a button and a door came nearby and then i opened it......(he continued the story)."
Palkia said, " Don't worry your friend will be fine."
Then they kept on talking and Palkia told the story and then zekrom asked him a thing.
Zekrom asked, " Ranfeo, we are asking you to help us and we want you to catch Palkia and then you both beat the other bad pokemon."
Ranfeo replied, "Ok...(Then he caught Palkia with his master ball.)

Chapter 5 - Jarenn

Jarenn, Dialga and lucario reached there. Jarenn looked around and was amazed in seeing that place and then some pokemon came nearby and then Jarenn took out his Torterra, Nidoking and Ursaring. He told them and lucario to use attacks on the other pokemon and they fainted. They continued their journey and defeated all the pokemon that came nearby. After travelling for 5 days they finally reached the HQ of the opponents. Then mewtwo came by and told them that Ranfeo was safe with Palkia. Jarenn was happy to hear that and he went to the entrance of the opponent HQ and then defeated all the pokemon with Dialga and he challenged Danter to make a war against them in the place in that huge steel box. The pokemon returned there and trained there for the war. Danter went and called Darkrai and Dazeroin to join the war.

Chapter 6 - The first war

The pokemon of the opponent and the pokemon of Jarenn came front for the battle and the battle begun and Jarenn was losing.
Darkrai used Dream Eater and treid to put some pokemon to sleep and then Dialga kept on using various attacks on their pokemon. Then suddenly Danter, Darkrai and Dazerion used poweful attacks and many pokemon were defeated and destroyed. Then Suddenly Danter used a powerful Hyper Beam on Dialga and Suddenly a Water Pulse hit it and there was Palkia and the group of pokemon. They combined and then defeated those 3 pokemon and their group and then Rayquaza came and the battle continued and finally Dialga defeated Rayquaza using Blizzard.
This battle was reported to Micloid and Giratina and they decided of a final war.

Chapter 7 - The final war

The war was going to begin and both the sides were getting ready.The war begun and all the other pokemon with Giratina and Micloid were defeated in the beginning. Then Giratina used some powerful attacks and many of the good pokemon got destroyed and then Micloid also used some attacks and a few other also got destroyed. Then Jarenn an Ranfeo were losing the battle. Then Micloid used a powerful Blizzard on Dialga and Mewtwo came in between and got hurt badly. Then Dialga and Jarenn got angry and he told Dialge to use some attacks and it used them on Micloid and Micloid Fainted and then Dialga got very angry and it used a very strong Dragon Pulse and Giratina also fainted then Dialga got hurt badly.

Chapter 8 - The end

After the battle Dialga and Palkia was lying down and Dialga was hurt very badly and Jarenn was next to it and Ranfeo was also there.
Jarenn spoke, " Dialga! Please don't go away, I want you."
Dialga replied, "Thanks a lot Jarenn. You have helped me achieve my aim."
Jarenn told, " Don't thank me. Just don't go away."
Dailga told, " Today Jarenn, you have helped me gain peace and now i can go an rest with my father and there will be another Dialga coming in my place."
Jarenn cried and replied, "I need you and you are my best friend ever."
Dialga replied, "Sorry but i have to go. Hope you will be fine and thank you so.....
(His voice stopped and Dialga had passend away)
Jarenn shouted, "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!! Dialgaaaa come back!!."
Then he went out of the steel rock and went back to his house but everydad he remembered Dialga.

Made a few editing and i will give my second try later.

Okay,I'll enter.

The mother of Lugia
by ~neleann123

4,000,000 years ago,Lumayas was born with her 4 other sisters.

Castela,Recalis,Trainita,and Taymayis.But,Lumayas was the most intelligent and loving of all.

Soon,Taymayis grew jealous of her sisters.2,000 years later,she left her family.

Lumayas loves all her sisters,so she and her 3 sisters went to find Taymayis.

Sadly,she was never found.

2,000,000 years later,Lumayas gave birth to Lugia.

"He's my ocean of joy."Said Lumayas."I will care for him all my life."

She began taking care of her son.She would study,but she would rather take care of Lugia.

5,000 years later,when Lugia was five,Lumayas was going to take crown for sea guardian.

A few days later,Lugia and Lumayas swam to the ceremony.

Everyone was there.Arceus was waiting for Lumayas's arrival.

"As of today,I will honor a intelligent and loving women as guardian of the sea."He said.

"STOP!!!"Yelled a furious voice.Standing to her horror,Lumayas saw her long lost sister.

"Lumayas shall not be guardian of sea,I should."Said Taymayis.

"Sister,what are you doing?!"Squealed Lumayas.

"I'm here to get the crown.You can't be queen,you are pathetic and a fool,"Said Taymayis.

"How dare you say that,Taymayis!"Yelled Lumayas.

"Mommy,stoop!"Said poor,little Lugia,unable to stop his mother.

Taymayis walked toward Lugia."DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH HIM!!!"Wailed Lumayas.

"Ah,so this is your child..."Said Taymayis,evily.

Taymaylis punched Lugia on the cheek.

"AHHH!!!"Yelled Lumayas.She used a chaotic aero blast on her sister.

"YOU DARE CHALLENGE THE TRUE GUARDIAN?!"Said Taymaylis.

"I challenge my sister,the TRUE FOOL!!!"Yelled Lumayas.

They fought day and night.It caused great damage to the ocean,but it ended.

The match stopped.The winner was...Taymayis.

"Hahaha...I know you cannot defeat me."Said Taymayis.

Lumayis couldn't stand up,the pain had caused her to...faint.

"YOU SHALL NOT DEFEAT MY MOTHER!!!!!!!!!!!"Yelled a fierce voice.

Taymayis and Lumayas looked.It was a large,powerful,grown Lugia.

Lumayas was proud of her son.She passed out,though.

Lugia used a powerful dragon pulse on Taymayis,Taymayis fainted for nine days.

Lugia went back to normal form.

Even though Lumayas was proud of her son,she was upset of her defeat.

She flew away...and disappeared.Lugia and the others never saw her again.

Lugia was taken by the hands of a Mew,a sweet motherly pokemon.

Lugia is looking for his real mother,searching every sea,ocean,and pond.

Lugia still believes he can meet her,and be happy again.

Mew sadly left Lugia on his own,because she has other pokemon to help.

Lugia lives on Whirlpool islands of the johto region,lonely with no one to love.

Legend says that Lumayas live in the unova region,deep under Abyssal Ruins.

Lumayas would maybe,if she wanted,challenge Taymayis again and reunite with her son.

by me from my deviantart

can't wait just few more days remaining

once upon a time a moltres destroyed everything then moltres met jarenn jarenn told moltres stop what the pokemon is doing moltres roared means i will listen then jarenn threw a pokeball moltres went in yes jarenn said when she found the only forest and saw a cottage ianboy0212 come out he showed his freind jirachi he said me and jirachi survived in this forest because of jirachi's magic barrier but there are more survivers it was people jirachi made cottages for them they thanked jarenn and ianboy0212 then they named the town Jiratown named after jarenn an jirachi after that their ws a complain the people are raging war with you the ranger said then pokemon made roars means war! war! war! in rage but jirachi an ianboy explained the people the people calmed down and jarenn and moltres explained to the pokemon everyone came to peace the people made statues to remember moltres,jirachi,ianboy0212 and jarenn the end.



Like it please make me the winner please lord.

The Pokemon Seige hero's team : jareen [ main] kolton [friend , my real name] Jade [ friend] enemy team : diath [ boss] fator [ diath assisstant] rage , miaro , shadow leviathon . [ commanders] the location : onno Chapter 1 - the land of joy on a hot summer day , once dusk hit , jareen awoke . he was prepared for an amazing day ahead of him , because it was his 10th birthday . he was jumpstarted to get his very first pokemon . he heard " delivery!" and a pidove flew through a window carrying a package signed by proffeser pine . he opened the mysterious package and found something strange , a glowing pokeball . he picked up the pokeball , and there was an explosion outside.he knew what had happened . he look through the window and running around were metanized pokemon , shooting energy , missles , and destroying the town . jareen shouted " go!!!!" chapter 2 - team mech jareen tossed the pokeball and appeared ..... a rainbow hitmonlee ! jareen was amazed with it , he jumped out the window and headed for war , with his friends kolton and jade . kolton shouted " go , esclaviar!" and a esclaviar appeared . Jade shouted " go !" and her best friend , a shaymin sky form , appeared. jareen told hitmonlee to use low sweep, and then high jump kick . kolton told esclaviar to use x- scissor and then cavalry lance . jade told shaymin to use protect , and then solar beam . soon the mech pokemon fainted ... they headed out of town together to stop whatever happened..... TO BE CONTINUED....

[quote="roblox" id="139494" dateline="June 24, 2012 7:35:47am" pid="142385"] The Pokemon Seige hero's team : jareen [ main] kolton [friend , my real name] Jade [ friend] enemy team : diath [ boss] fator [ diath assisstant] rage , miaro , shadow leviathon . [ commanders] the location : onno Chapter 1 - the land of joy: on a hot summer day , once dusk hit , jareen awoke . he was prepared for an amazing day ahead of him , because it was his 10th birthday . he was jumpstarted to get his very first pokemon . he heard " delivery!" and a pidove flew through a window carrying a package signed by proffeser pine . he opened the mysterious package and found something strange , a glowing pokeball . he picked up the pokeball , and there was an explosion outside.he knew what had happened . he look through the window and running around were metanized pokemon , shooting energy , missles , and destroying the town . jareen shouted " go!!!!" chapter 2 - team mech: jareen tossed the pokeball and appeared ..... a rainbow hitmonlee ! jareen was amazed with it , he jumped out the window and headed for war , with his friends kolton and jade . kolton shouted " go , esclaviar!" and a esclaviar appeared . Jade shouted " go !" and her best friend , a shaymin sky form , appeared. jareen told hitmonlee to use low sweep, and then high jump kick . kolton told esclaviar to use x- scissor and then cavalry lance . jade told shaymin to use protect , and then solar beam . soon the mech pokemon fainted ... they headed out of town together to stop whatever happened..... Chapter 3 - mewtwo and zoroark : they worked their way through lily forest, jareen captured ursaring, accelgor, and a phanphy . kolton caught regirock, parasect, and beartic. jade caught venasaur, and meganium, also shaymin had an egg . after training they came to mirage cave , home of mewtwo and zoroark. they entered the cave and suddenly a wall blasted open. they peeked through only to find several bisharp and lucario attacking mewtwo and zoroark. they took out all but 3 bisharp and 3 lucario, then fainted. " go, ursaring!" shouted jareen . " go, regirock !" yelled kolton. "go , venasaur!" exclaimed jade. together they defeated the pokemon and healed mewtwo and zoroark . then the legendaries explained about team mech, and that they had training to do. Chapter 4- outpost outlaws[bonus]: After their training they headed on the road to the 3 outposts of diath.in outpost 1 they battled rage. in number 2 they battled miaro. and in number 3 they battled the strongest: shadow leviathon. chapter 5 - diath: they later reached....... To Be Continued!

btw im roblox

if it fine if it's only one chapter (left without a continuation?)