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the inner darkness
November 17, 2013 4:33:25pm (This post was last modified: November 18, 2013 2:51:03pm by teuntj1badb3.)
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the inner darkness
This is a poem i just made i dont have a title so if you can think of one that would be cool

Cold as ice
Hard as metal
A heart of stone
Nothing good

A mind filled with vile thoughts
I am left here in the freezing cold
No there is no one to stand by my side

My heroes have died in my head
My heart is shattered
No one picks up the pieces

I am the one who walks alone
The shadow of the night
Ugly
Dark inside

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November 17, 2013 5:12:48pm
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You a Great Poet!
I like your Poem very much but I have no idea about suggesting a title Sorry!
How about the Title-Dark Inside;just like your last verse in the poem?

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November 17, 2013 5:56:15pm
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nice job with the poem its good
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November 17, 2013 9:55:11pm
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Lol nice poem that u made I would call it the inner darkness

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November 17, 2013 10:01:02pm
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Awesome poem! I like snorunt's idea for a title. I'm not that great at poetry, but that's good that someone is!

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November 18, 2013 2:50:00pm
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Allright the inner darkness it is thanks for the positive feedback and the comments and also a nice title so thank you snorunt

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December 24, 2013 11:03:51pm
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Cool poem bro. sounds deep, and has a true meaning to it. the inner darkness is a great title for it
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