Unofficial Trailer

jacktheking · (This post was last modified: April 28, 2012 11:30:20am by jacktheking.)

I just make this for fun...
Hope you all would like it.
[you must login to view links]

Ranstormer · April 28, 2012 11:42:22am

nice but there are some mistakes.
1. In that part where u show dream's team make it "Make them the strongest team on creed!" you put stronger instead of strongest.
2. In that part where it comes "Train your pokemon with NPC player. Change it to "Train your pokemon by by defeating NPC's"
3. After the above one the part comes "Than battle real...." change that to then
4. In that "play some game at....." change the game to games
5. In that "trade thing with friend" change it to "trade pokemon, etc. with friend.
Those were only the grammar mistakes i found.
Very good trailer
10/10 (Even though there is no 10/10, this trailer deserves it)

jacktheking · (This post was last modified: April 28, 2012 11:50:20am by jacktheking.)

LOL?
10/10 I dont dare to take...
Like i say before my English very bad
You forgot one mistake...
That i just notice when i upload.
At the ''Chit chat with you friend'' it should be ''Chit chat with your friend(s)''

Ranstormer · April 28, 2012 11:50:26am

yeah i think if you update those parts. It might become the official trailer.

jacktheking · April 28, 2012 11:51:12am

It cant be....
Official can only give to da man trailer...

Ranstormer · April 28, 2012 11:59:18am

see it is better that the current trailer i guess. If Da Man likes it more than the current one he might replace it.

~~Joker14~~ · April 28, 2012 6:04:53pm

This message is hidden because this person has been banned.

~~harmony~~ · April 28, 2012 11:33:43pm

This message is hidden because this person has been banned.

jacktheking · April 29, 2012 12:23:51am

@Joker14 I dont dare to accept 10/10...Btw thank you...
@harmony My English very bad hope you(and other)wont mind
@Ranstormer Really?I dont think so...

jacktheking · April 29, 2012 9:35:42am

Wow in 1Day this video got 100View...

Da Man · April 29, 2012 9:41:29am

It's a nice and very clean trailer :)!

Could almost replace the current trailer. :P

jacktheking · April 29, 2012 9:46:54am

"April 29, 2012 5:41:29am""Da Man" Wrote: It's a nice and very clean trailer :)!

Could almost replace the current trailer. :P

Really?

Dany X · (This post was last modified: April 29, 2012 9:53:38am by Dany X.)

It looks really great! 10/10

"Trade thing with your firend" Trolololol

Ranstormer · April 29, 2012 9:54:54am

"April 29, 2012 5:46:54am""jacktheking" Wrote:
"Da Man" Wrote:
"April 29, 2012 5:41:29am" pid="118452"
It's a nice and very clean trailer :)!

Could almost replace the current trailer. :P
Really?

I told you didn't I....

jacktheking · April 29, 2012 9:56:12am

@Dany X My English very bad...Hope you and other wont mind
@Ranstormer Yes you did (:

Board Statistics
Board Statistics
	Our members have made a total of 526,604 posts in 39,243 threads (excluding the 'Miscellaneous' forum catergory, deleted posts and hidden forum sections). We currently have 342,270 members registered on this Online Pokemon RPG.