Rate this apocalyptic short story intro

charmtrainee · November 10, 2012 6:12:22am

lol okay XD

btw, this is kind of inbetween first and second person, so there wont be very much dialogue. Its not like there will be much anyways, since there are only like 20,000 people left scattered around the earth, but, you know XD

EmoNovember · November 10, 2012 6:14:24am

Pm me or post in here if you have got anything new :D
i will favorite the post so i can monitor your story :D

charmtrainee · November 10, 2012 6:16:36am

Okay, Ill start pming you tomorrow. You obviously dont need me to do it now XD

btw, adding Part 3 now.

EmoNovember · November 10, 2012 6:20:21am

awesome i will check it out :)

charmtrainee · November 10, 2012 6:27:54am

I'm going to take a break for the night... er :/ morning now, if you want to get literal XD But I will continue to update in the morning. gn guys :)

EmoNovember · November 10, 2012 6:46:54am

Good Night........ lets hope the story goes well

charmtrainee · November 10, 2012 2:26:35pm

Added part 4. link coming soon.

~~Raggedy Swagg~~ · November 10, 2012 3:30:16pm

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charmtrainee · November 10, 2012 5:07:06pm

^ lol cool XD 73 pages? so far Ive spent about 30 minutes on it total and I've got 1 XD

charmtrainee · November 10, 2012 5:09:05pm

oh btw, should I change the main character's name? It sounds a little too... *Not able to put into words*
Suggestions welcome :)

~~Raggedy Swagg~~ · November 10, 2012 5:19:41pm

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charmtrainee · November 11, 2012 1:17:38am

What should I change it to?

~~Raggedy Swagg~~ · November 11, 2012 1:23:08am

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charmtrainee · November 11, 2012 1:27:08am

Connor doesnt sound cool enough though :/

katiesmiles · November 11, 2012 2:10:00am

You need more :o

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