tor u copyied me basically

thnx for entering aswell toterra

yoshi no problem

December 21, 2012 5:52:51pmyoshibuster09012 Wrote:  tor u copyied me basically

do you think?? there are similar things like presents but what would u want in a christmass story?? it wouldnt be one if there was violance in it

there is a orphanage in the story but i didnt say anything about being adopted. i just thought of a story of pokemon in a orphanage on christmas eve and christmas day in a little part of it.

even in orphanages they deserve christmass

Ryuran447 - 97020

RR: I want a userbar for christmas.
Zap: No ya dont
RR: Yea I guess ur right

December 21, 2012 6:12:30pmRyuRan447 Wrote:  Ryuran447 - 97020

RR: I want a userbar for christmas.
Zap: No ya dont
RR: Yea I guess ur right

uhm ok r u entering this to the content?

December 20, 2012 8:05:54pmMango Dolphin Wrote:  

Twas the night before Christmas in all through the house,
Not a creature was stirring, not even a mouse!
The stockings were hung by the chimney with care
In hopes that Saint Nicolas soon would be there!

The children were nestled all snug in their beds
while visions of sugar plums danced in their heads
.....saint!

What do you think?

^ this is copied
It's a famous poem called twas night before Christmas

serious u'd rather be like this then create a story of your own??
tyizor really disapointing

u know copied story's dont have a chance doesnt mean i have to be rude about it..

December 22, 2012 12:51:48amTyizor Wrote:  

Twas the night before Christmas in all through the house,
Not a creature was stirring, not even a mouse!
The stockings were hung by the chimney with care
In hopes that Saint Nicolas soon would be there!

The children were nestled all snug in their beds
while visions of sugar plums danced in their heads
.....saint!

What do you think?

^ this is copied
It's a famous poem called twas night before Christmas [/quote]

It's a parody of a poem. Not a copy.

@Yoshibuster
It was hard for me to read, but I got to the end of it. I loved your story, apart from the fact I'm a grammar nazi.

@torterra
I didn't really see the point of Combusken being greedy, but I saw the mural. Nice job.
I'm not judging, I just really enjoyed your stories.

so you half copied

NO! It's a fluffin' parody. A spinoff. A mixup.

NOT A STUPID RIPOFF! Get a dictionary.

sorry mango dolphin but there cant be any story according to CHRISTMAS EVENT because it is a event in which you have no words to describe you feelings for GOD THE LORD so sorry

December 22, 2012 11:34:37amattacker Wrote:  sorry mango dolphin but there cant be any story according to CHRISTMAS EVENT because it is a event in which you have no words to describe you feelings for GOD THE LORD so sorry

for each their own believes, i for one am celebrating purely becouse it is one of the only times, if not the only one at all in wich i can see the good in us humans 9 of the 10 times we are nothing but a disapointment for ourselves and others around us

I'd like to enter.

Oshawott sighed. It was christmas eve, and not anyone had noticed the poor little thing. Quietly, he walked onto the balcony of the house he shared with Pikachu, Snivy and Tepig. Quickly, she noticed a star shooting across the sky. The trees were in awe at it's beauty, then Oshawott silently spoke;
"I wish Christmas could be fun and enjoyable for all of us." Suddenly, footsteps came outside of his room. A yellow creature opened the door.
"Hey Oshawott, it's starting to get late..." The creature squeaked "May aswell wait for christmas day by shutting your eyes."
"Ok Pikachu." Oshawott smiled as he appouched the bed "Night!"
"Night." Pikachu smiled, as she went to the next room. Loud noises came from it as the walls cried in pain. With that said, Oshawott climbed into his bed, and closed his eyes, in hopes his wish would come true.

The next morning, Oshawott ran off, ignoring the stairs hoping to open his presents, he went up into the attic and took out a large rectangular box with Yellow wrapping and a red bow. He stormed into Pikachu's room.
"Ugh, Oshawott, what are you doing with that present!" Pikachu cried, as the light came from her door "You can't get your present before your other brothers!"
"It's not for me, silly." Oshawott giggled "It's for you!" He gave Pikachu the presents and pikachu purposly ruined the wrapping, then looked at Oshawott.
"It's the most nicest thing I ever had." Pikachu silently said, struck in awe.
"and that's how I wanted christmas to be." Oshawott smiled "Good for my carer, and for myself." With that said, Oshawott went back to his room, and later opened his presents, with a smile on his face. Every went good that day. Well, that's what oshawott thought anyway.



I hope it's ok.