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What's the deal with Poetry?
February 16, 2013 8:15:34am
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What's the deal with Poetry?
Poetry is a combination of story with song,thus a beat is made in which many come to enjoy.I never hear anyone talking about poetry or famous poets ever,so maybe I can share what one is like.

Everything always goes wrong
whenever something in my life is right.
I keep listening to the same song
feeling the same empty dark space with no light.

I find a way to drive things away
by doing the things I do to saying the things I say.
I lost my Father by a simple wave of his keys.
I lost my cousin when he took them out.
Now I feel I'm slipping again.
I feel as if I lost the one I loved,my best friend.

I want to be happy.I really do...
But I'll never be if I lose you.

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February 16, 2013 10:38:44am
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nice poem , i can see your heart by picking this. can you tell who might be the author please. very nice poem and clever. i can see the soul upon the poem.

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February 16, 2013 10:46:53am
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My big brother, Steven F.Cordero.We have different last names...

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February 16, 2013 11:14:50am
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or a haiku such as
elegant leaves
breezing in the midst of dawn
in calm ocean breeze
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February 16, 2013 11:22:30am
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oh i see is he some kind a writer somelike a book release. or he is just a freelancer writer. i like he's skills in writing since i once want to be a writer. but since it will be hard in my country to earn money with that profession i stop.

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February 16, 2013 11:25:09am
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February 16, 2013 11:26:18am
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Yeah he stopped too,and we don't know what he's doing.He was real good at it too.He filled up a whole journal on it.

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February 16, 2013 11:29:25am
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oh and also in haiku's try to keep the words seasonal and graceful
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February 16, 2013 11:43:47am
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-Friendship
Even if time stops
and the world explodes into bits
I'll always be there.

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February 16, 2013 11:45:19am
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yeah i also done that but it was way back when i was high school. i wish i could turn back the time when making poem make me happy. that brings happiness to my friends.

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February 16, 2013 11:52:08am
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Maybe I should try some myself one day,just to carry on this legacy.

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February 16, 2013 11:53:13am
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Really nice poem you got there ^.^
it is one of the best i have read in a while... keep writing


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February 16, 2013 12:13:45pm
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oh yeah it maybe great to get his legacy who might know yo can be a brilliant writer than your brother. i hope some of my coming children will inherent my legacy to in writing.

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February 16, 2013 1:09:42pm
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I guess I might just make another.
Just because I like my brother.
He's a role-model,a hero.
A genius if you think,though!
If only more would appreciate this art.
I guess it all starts with my part.

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February 16, 2013 10:54:28pm
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^^ i like the poems. So are you saying that poems should be given a lot more credit than they are currently given? If so, i definitely agree, but a good percent of the art industry (not only poems) are being neglected
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