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Ratings would be appreciated! ^^

its been 2 days no1 critique wow...
i wud like to be the first 1..
that is great but theres too much darkness
and deoxy's hand are looking type of ancient

yeah the fusion sprite is darker, but I think it's okay. 7/10.

Not bad of it's your fusion but you know it's hard too see so 5/10.

it looks pretty good but it is kind of hard to see so i will give it 7/10

10/10 for a first-timer. Looks cool.

Yeah, I just want to say again what the others have said already lol.... Too dark in my opinion...

But the concept and sprite itself is good for a first time.

Though also those colors on the chest (the red and blue) make me think something/someone throwed a can of blue and red paint against its chest.

But again, good for a first time.

5.5/10

~xpie out

I'd like to say the same as Cyprum i be;ief it is very good for a first timer, but in the long run you need to try make it look like a 50/50 split so it isn't too dark

It isn't much dark TBH. I messed up on something and increased some alpha on it. It happens to see darker in dark background and lighter in light background.
Anyways, thanks for the feedbacks!

it looks pretty good but it is kind of hard to see so i will give it /8/10

And then he said let there be light <-- try this but overall its not little bits of touchups but nothing too much 7/10

uhmm its fine I guess to me it looks like its too dark it looks like a dark fusion make it more brighter unless this was on purpouse 8/10

Yeah, thanks again all.

well since its ur first fusion its really nice...but tbh its a bit dark...and the fusion of electivire wit deoxys doesnt suit really well..but on the whole 7/10

Thanks blue. I'll try fusion with others again.