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the inner darkness
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November 17, 2013 4:33:25pm (This post was last modified: November 18, 2013 2:51:03pm by teuntj1badb3.)
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the inner darkness
This is a poem i just made i dont have a title so if you can think of one that would be cool
Cold as ice Hard as metal A heart of stone Nothing good A mind filled with vile thoughts I am left here in the freezing cold No there is no one to stand by my side My heroes have died in my head My heart is shattered No one picks up the pieces I am the one who walks alone The shadow of the night Ugly Dark inside
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You a Great Poet!
I like your Poem very much but I have no idea about suggesting a title Sorry! How about the Title-Dark Inside;just like your last verse in the poem?
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nice job with the poem its good
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Lol nice poem that u made I would call it the inner darkness
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Awesome poem! I like snorunt's idea for a title. I'm not that great at poetry, but that's good that someone is!
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Allright the inner darkness it is thanks for the positive feedback and the comments and also a nice title so thank you snorunt
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Cool poem bro. sounds deep, and has a true meaning to it. the inner darkness is a great title for it
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