despair

teuntj1badb3 · November 21, 2013 5:42:51pm

This is a poem i made it hope you enjoy it

Poison flows through my blood
The rage is uncontrollable
But who cares?

Putrid blood flows through my veins
The birth of me will be undone
By the enemy inside me

A flash of the blade
The quick snip
A small cut

The line of red
Suits my the green of my rotting veins
The blood matches my bloodshot blue eyes

Holy man always ignored
Tell me with a glock to the head it isn't true
I keep in my bible a flask of poison and a bullet of blood

Tear my face away
Boil the insides
Grind my eyes
Hand me the cocktail of my demise
This is the end of light

kingtracy · November 25, 2013 6:11:27am

Sounds pretty good but at the same time a little weird

becbec · November 25, 2013 7:22:54am

i agree. good how you thought it up but abit distirbing in its words

teuntj1badb3 · November 27, 2013 6:56:20am

I know i tend to be a bit psychotic at times xD and it may seem like it is evil but i just write the words that pop into my head when i get words in my head

Giratina11 · November 27, 2013 7:30:17am

nice poem but i agree with becbec and kingtracy it does sound wired

Deinosuchus · November 28, 2013 12:22:04am

just like the others i'd have to say it's wierd and a bit creepy
but my guess is most people can actually relate to this poem
as everyone feels like this at some moment, and then you will have adiffrent opinion about it

AnTiN · November 28, 2013 2:22:40am

Nice poem!
And it has definetly got despair in it!XD

kenjiyu · December 08, 2013 10:24:21pm

It's a good poem, but it seems sad and sort of creepy to me. How did you come up with a poem like that? Did it just pop into our head or were you inspired by something?

teuntj1badb3 · December 09, 2013 6:12:42am

it just popped into my head(sometimes i get a word in my head and another and if i write them down and connect them i get poems :))

Travissharingan · December 24, 2013 7:33:58pm

I agree with others, it does sounds sort of depressing and weird, but i understand the message behind it, and it definitely has a good and understandable message.

majinhoff · January 01, 2014 9:28:54pm

It's a good poem, but a bit dark for me. Could definitely see people liking this poem though

bond07 · January 06, 2014 11:43:11pm

Very imaginative. Even though it sounds rather eerie and depressing, the poem itself is good.

NessUnderling · January 07, 2014 9:55:43pm

YAY I like that poem! Very violent! YAY

JAY STORAGE · January 08, 2014 2:44:13pm

Nice poem ,intresting i like it

assiren · January 28, 2014 12:16:39pm

Umm yeah. I have this project where I need a poem . so can I use yours?? This poem was first that came across my mind when they said poem.

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