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my own made song
February 25, 2013 9:06:42pm
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my own made song
this is a song i have written on my own i hope you like it, it is just the lyrics i don't write melodies, perhaps someone can think of a name for the song as well because i can't think of one.

I can't think of the words to speak. thoughts made by whispers in my head.
all these years were cloaked by darkness, all my fears were exploited by the masses.

scars show my history
a broken heart has felt the past
there is no future, there is no tomorrow
when all i loved left me with nothing but sorrow.

no light has cleared the horizon
the dreams of my future,a happy life,it was wrong.
no here i stand looking at my reflection and thinking back of how i would cry when i felt no affection

stupid me believing life is beautiful
i was dumb to have faith.

whispers turn to shouts turn to screams still i am deaf to all the things i need to hear.
i was blind till a few months ago

a veil of gold wrapped around a head with eyes as green as the most beautiful emerald you have ever seen. she had the body of a god, only she thought it was buddah.
she made me open my eyes
i can hear all the screams inside my head, am i lost again?,desperation drove me insane or can this really be?

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February 25, 2013 9:09:26pm
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nice made,i made a song too,but i threw it away.
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February 25, 2013 9:09:29pm
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Good song i like it you are good at it but i dont like sad stuff next time can u do a happy one

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February 25, 2013 9:15:34pm
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i will try but i am not really good at happy songs, i am kind of good in songs that give courage or just a kind of mood to fight if you understand what i mean with that.

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February 25, 2013 9:55:28pm
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Great lyrics bro. I would like to hear it with some music too. :)
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February 25, 2013 9:56:04pm
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Nice song. Keep up the good work can't wait to read your next one :)

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