Just your suggestions and whatnot.

story is good but how its related to the name of the story Mystical Island cuz the story is revolving only inside the pickachu's stomach

anyway am waiting for next post how u will get out of pickachu's stomach :)

Thanks, The reason it's called Mystical Island is because the trees transforms Humans into what the Pokemon that inhabits them desire, the one I touched in the story transformed me into a Strawberry because the Pikachu that inhabited the tree was wanting food because it didn't find any for a while.