This is a story contest. The rules are simple:
1. You MUST have AT LEAST the following characters:
Main Protagonist
Main Antagonist
Love Interest
Comic Foil
You may add more characters.
2. The characters MUST be pokemon.
3. There is no size limit whatsoever.
4. The contest ends when I decide so.
5. I haven't decided on a prize, so don't ask me.
6. The story with the highest score when I end the contest wins.
7. The stories will be scored like this:
Enter Name
Originality: Up to 10
Diversity of Characters: Up to 10 (The 4 I listed earn 5 points.)
Interesting Plot: Up to 10
Total: Up to 30
8. Enjoy!

a gastly came to the earth
Had a big fight with Pikachu! Then he ran away, he went to level 16, he evolved himself to a haunter.
Then he saw a piplup, the piplup teased him, so he also had a fight and then had many fights with another male gastly and camerupt and also once again with pikachu. He then evolved to Gengar. He was wandering in the forest and met a female Gengar. He fell in love and both ran away.
They married and lived happily everafter. The female gengar met another strong lvl 10,000 gengar and devorsed the old gengar. then the new gengar and the female gengar lived happily ever after!!!!!

THANK YOU!

minojsos7
Originality: 9
Diversity of Characters: 6
Interesting Plot: 5
Total: 20

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Once there was a pikachu wandering around the forest, all of a sudden a treecko came out of a tree. The treecko had a thunderstone in his hand. Pickachu ran away fast as he could so he wouldn't evolve, but then the pikachu bumped in to a bonsly. Then the bonsly started fake crying, and then the treecko caught up with pikachu. the treecko took off his mask and it was sudowoodo! The sudowoodo used mimic since he was very mad. But when he used the mimic, sudowoodo bumped into bonsly too. Then the sudowoodo's thunderstone fell out of his hands and went into bonsly's mouth. Then bonsly stopped crying, had a nice meal,and ran away. Then pikachu fell in love with sudowoodo and lived happily ever after.

-The End, thankyou for the contest
-llime9

one afternoon a dewott walked though a forest seing a cinncino falling in love with her
a prinplup came though seeing cinncino too falling in love when they both got to her they started fighting. When then prinplup cheated fighting dewott then was about to get cinnccino to take away then dewott got up and saidand said, "well bring her i want to fight tommrrow" then walked away when they came back the next day they started to fight again then cinncino spoke up "wait wait!!!!! you guys are fighting over a dude!!!" then dewott and prinplup fainted. cinncino got dewott up and said "of course i wasn't a dude i hated that he cheated for me come on let go somewhere besides this forest" and they lived happliy ever after.

One day, a Cresselia was hovering around in the Palm Beach when she met a Darkrai sleeping underneath a tree. She fell in love with him in the first sight. She went near him when an evil Gastly attacked her and caught her up to make her his bride. Then, Darkrai saw her in the prison of Gastly and came to save her. Gastly and Darkrai fought very hardly. At last, Darkrai won and released Cresselia and they went together to stay Happily ever after. After a year, a Lunatone was born.
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August 15, 2012 9:28:49pmRaggedy Swagg Wrote:  So all characters must be Pokemon?

Yes.

August 15, 2012 10:21:26pmllime9 Wrote:  Once there was a pikachu wandering around the forest, all of a sudden a treecko came out of a tree. The treecko had a thunderstone in his hand. Pickachu ran away fast as he could so he wouldn't evolve, but then the pikachu bumped in to a bonsly. Then the bonsly started fake crying, and then the treecko caught up with pikachu. the treecko took off his mask and it was sudowoodo! The sudowoodo used mimic since he was very mad. But when he used the mimic, sudowoodo bumped into bonsly too. Then the sudowoodo's thunderstone fell out of his hands and went into bonsly's mouth. Then bonsly stopped crying, had a nice meal,and ran away. Then pikachu fell in love with sudowoodo and lived happily ever after.

-The End, thankyou for the contest
-llime9

llime9....YOU'RE BANNED!!!! (Sorry dude, but you forgot to put in a comic foil.)

August 16, 2012 1:18:04amshineheart Wrote:  one afternoon a dewott walked though a forest seing a cinncino falling in love with her
a prinplup came though seeing cinncino too falling in love when they both got to her they started fighting. When then prinplup cheated fighting dewott then was about to get cinnccino to take away then dewott got up and saidand said, "well bring her i want to fight tommrrow" then walked away when they came back the next day they started to fight again then cinncino spoke up "wait wait!!!!! you guys are fighting over a dude!!!" then dewott and prinplup fainted. cinncino got dewott up and said "of course i wasn't a dude i hated that he cheated for me come on let go somewhere besides this forest" and they lived happliy ever after.

shineheart....YOU'RE BANNED!!!!!(You forgot to put in a comic foil.)

August 16, 2012 3:55:35amChizuru Wrote:  One day, a Cresselia was hovering around in the Palm Beach when she met a Darkrai sleeping underneath a tree. She fell in love with him in the first sight. She went near him when an evil Gastly attacked her and caught her up to make her his bride. Then, Darkrai saw her in the prison of Gastly and came to save her. Gastly and Darkrai fought very hardly. At last, Darkrai won and released Cresselia and they went together to stay Happily ever after. After a year, a Lunatone was born.
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Chizuru....YOU'RE BANNED!!!!(You forgot to include a comic foil.)

It seems that no one knows what a comic foil is, so I'll tell you: a comic foil is the main protagonist's best friend. The comic foil always has an attitude that contradicts the main protagonist's.
For example:
Main Protagonist: A grim, negative type of guy.
Comic foil: A jolly, happy-go-lucky type of guy.
(It also works vice-versa.)
Everyone who was banned for not including a comic foil can give it another go.
Enjoy!

okay my second time this will be different:

once there was a treecko who had nothing in such nothing one day his best pal mudkip had walked around treecko being annoying "heyheyheyehyehy whats going what to go the ther arcade"
and treecko had to repily "NO!!im not going to play!!" everyday mudkip would do this intill one day treecko saw a torchic he really liked he didn't know what to do since he knew nothing about love one day mudkip asked "you need advice on love? wellwell i can help help" that day treecko wasn't really annoyed by that he said "okay" taking a sigh that day mudkip thaught treecko all about love then the next day treecko brought flowers and choclate for torchic then he asked "do you want to go out?" he asked softly from what torchic saw she was happy "of course i will" she replied then a charmander saw torchic and fell in love with her and snatched her said "she mine i saw her first and ran away with her treecko watched as she dissapeared that day he went looking for her then found charmander and asked for her back and charmander repiled "No i won't" then treecko charged at charmander but he knocked treecko away then breathed fire at treecko treecko fell then torchic from the other side yelled "you can do it treecko i beleive in you!!" then treecko evolved into a grovyle and defeated charmander and took torchic home she finally evolved and the had their wedding mudkip who was still mudkip hosted it all very more cheery that his best friend got married grovyle and combusken lived happliy ever after The End

there that should be better

One sunny day there was a Croagunk sat on a tree and his buddy nuzleaf came along
'Wats the matter croagunk' said nuzleaf ' lets play!'
'It's too hot, my ability is making the sun suck out my energy!' Answered croagunk ' plus just playing ouside tag or something like we usually do is boring! (If i play with anyone it's my love bellosom)'
'Croagunk, I had no idea, you see, sunny days help me!' said nuzleaf
'Nuzleaf, I'm staying in the shade of this tree and that is THAT!' Shouted croagunk angrily
'Oh well, looks like i can't get you a date with bellossom!' Laughed Nuzleaf
'Oh fine!' Exclaimed croagunk, and he jumped off the tree and started playing, and by the time Nuzleaf and Croagunk were finished, Croagunk was an unhealthy shade of bright pink!
'Just look at that hottie!'
'Who is that?' Asked croagunk
'It's me!' and bellossom walked out from behind the tree that croagunk took his shade on. 'Nice to see you croagunk, so where do you want to go for our date...'
'You choose! Sweetie!' Replied Croagunk!
later on in their life croagunk and bellossom got married, which made croagunk so happy, but then came the disaster, croagunk evolved, and started acting different.
Bellossom was annoyed and got divorced and instead got married to shiftry, who was infact the same nuzleaf who was croagunk/toxicroak's best friend.
Toxicroak was heartbroken, and he felt like he could never show his face to bellossom again, but bellossom saw these feelings and they got re-married, which was shiftry's plan all along
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One day, during the warmest summer ever, a snorlax felt the need to sleep under a tree on top of a cliff. While laying there, an exeggcute dropped from the tree and was bouncing around as if on a trampoline. The Snorlax would smack around, but that just made the exeggcute bounce higher. As exeggcute bounced, it knocked a Pidgey nest out of the tree, with a small egg inside. Snorlax let out a growl and smacked the exeggcute as it was falling with the nest. Exeggcute snuggled up to the egg thinking it belonged to him as he fell and started bouncing again. In doing so, the egg cracked open and a little pidgey was born. Exeggcute fell in love with Pidgey at first sight and would let it sit on him as he bounced higher and higher. Snorlax was getting very upset, because it was too hot to be playing, and his stomach was getting upset. Once Exeggcute bounced really high into the air with Pidgey chirping along wildly, Snorlax sat up and grabbed all the eggs of Eggsecute in one big bear hug and threw him as high as possible. Pidgey started to go crazy. She used a Peck move on Snorlax as he laid back down, but it did nothing due to her small size and his big body. She would chirp louder and louder until Snorlax rolled over and almost squished little Pidgey. As he rolled Pidgey stepped away and pecked at him some more. Exeggcute started to fall back to land but something was strange. Pidgey looked real excited once the shadow started to show, but then a bright light hit the ground and the shadow was gone. Behind Pidgey was a loud thump, and she turned to see Exeggcute, but it wasn't Exeggcute, he had evolved into Exeggcutor. Exeggcutor picked Pidgey up in his new arms and gave her a kiss, while doing so a light was growing from the top of Exeggcutor's leafy head and a Solar beam erupted sending the sleeping Snorlax flying off the cliff. Exeggutor and Pidgey were so happy and he started to walk away with Pidgey nesting on his head, when a loud crash hit below the cliff followed by an even louder screaching roar of a 15' Dragonair. Dragonair came flying up the cliff wall and scared Exeggcutor so bad that he started charging another solar beam, but as he did so a cloud came by and covered up the sun, delaying Exeggcutor's new move and he started to panick with Pidgey hiding behind him. Dragonair shot a fast Hydro pump in their direction but hit the ground right in front of them. Pidgey saw the new hole filled with water and went to go play. Being as new to this world as can be she didn't know any better, and Dragonair sent another Hydro Pump blast towards her, but it met Exeggcutor's Solar beam and erupted a rainbow of water into the sky, causing Dragonair to be dazed, and with a well planned Razor leaf attack Exeggcutor sent the Dragonair flying into the near by tree and causing it to K.O. in the shade. Exeggcutor picked Pidgey up with a vinewhip and placed her on his head and Walked off to find a better place to play happily ... until another day.