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Lucky Dip Fixes/Removal/Complaints requests
July 08, 2014 6:11:36pm (This post was last modified: July 08, 2014 6:12:32pm by Da Man.)
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Lucky Dip Fixes/Removal/Complaints requests
If you have found a Lucky Dip saying to be unoriginal, poor or boring, please post it here so I can remove it.

If you found a Lucky Dip that has incorrect grammar or does not make sense, please post it here so that I can fix it.

Do NOT suggest new lucky dips here.
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July 08, 2014 6:29:24pm
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Before you had a chance to take a dip, Wailord suddenly uses Sleep Powder. Amy Rose started sleeping. Amy Rose woke up and under your pillow you found a Leaf Stone!
^ I got this a few days ago. Shouldn't it say YOU started sleeping and YOU woke up, instead of my username? I don't know many people who talk in third person, plus even if that's what it was going by, it doesn't make sense with the first part of the dip. :/

You take a dip... Chuck Norris popped out and kicked you in the face. You popped out a moonstone 60 coins!
^And then about a week before the first, I got this. That part at the end doesn't make sense.
Those are the only ones I've gotten that don't. :)

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July 10, 2014 12:23:14pm (This post was last modified: July 10, 2014 1:10:50pm by Lugia2000.)
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Editing so it fits with Topic...

I can't really recall any unoriginal Lucky dips...

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July 10, 2014 1:09:32pm
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Oh wait I read the Title incorrectly, I thought this was for Lucky dip as well as any other removal things or complaints... I'll just edit that later.. Like, 2 seconds later

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GLITTER FORCE MAKEOVER!!!

APPLY SHADES OF POWER!

GLITTER BOOTS!!!
GLITTER GAUNTLETS!!
HYAH!!!

A force as strong as life itself! I'm Glitter Spring!

Okay now that THAT'S over with.
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July 19, 2014 9:52:11am
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No please dont remove lucky dip. Instead of giving a large sentence, make it short like, you take a dip and got ____. For every dip. Thank you


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July 20, 2014 7:18:30pm
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He's not going to remove the Lucky Dip. -_-' He's just removing the parts like "You take a dip, blah, blah, blah happens and you get this." that don't make sense.

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July 27, 2014 8:11:16am
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"You take a dip... You hold out a bomb. Wailord eats the bomb on your hand and he explodes leaving behind 1 coins!"

Shouldn't it be One Coin? Not 1 Coins?

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GLITTER FORCE MAKEOVER!!!

APPLY SHADES OF POWER!

GLITTER BOOTS!!!
GLITTER GAUNTLETS!!
HYAH!!!

A force as strong as life itself! I'm Glitter Spring!

Okay now that THAT'S over with.
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August 19, 2014 11:46:14am
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you take a dip... Wailord thinks you food and eats you come out grabbing 54 coins

shouldn't it be your and not you
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September 02, 2014 7:12:56pm
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Himan67storage, the whole thing needed rewording. It should have been more like;
"Wailord thinks you're food and eats you. On your way out, you grab _(prize)_."

By the way, 'your' refers to something you own, (ie, 'on your way out') and you're is the contraction of 'you are' (ie, thinks you're food).

I've seen so many lucky dips with terrible grammar, guess I'll start relaying them to Da Man, as soon as I find more... I always forget the really bad ones. Eh.

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September 04, 2014 12:42:58pm
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"You take a dip... suddenly appears and challenges you to a battle. You lost so badly he laughed. For making him laugh, he gives you a Ultra Ball!"

Who appeared? What?

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September 12, 2014 12:41:25am
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'You take a dip... You fell into Wailord's stomach! You grabbed held of something, you swam out and found out that you grabbed a Master Ball!'

Well, 'grabbed held' should be 'grabbed hold', and there's too many 'you's.

May I suggest;
'You take a dip and accidentally fall into Wailord's stomach! You grabbed hold of something, and after you swam out, you found it was a Master Ball!'

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September 16, 2014 2:17:12pm
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Lucky dip is fun to do once in a day so it shoudlnt be removed
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September 16, 2014 7:12:04pm
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September 16, 2014 2:17:12pmkaurav Wrote:  Lucky dip is fun to do once in a day so it shoudlnt be removed

He's not going to remove the Lucky Dip kaurav. .-. He's just changing the 'You take a dip...blah blah blah, and you get XYZ' things that don't make sense or have bad grammar.

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September 17, 2014 12:12:16pm
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'You take a dip, and you see Darkrai coming out of Wailord's mouth! You try to catch it with a pokeball but it faints you.... When you wake up you find a Shiny Stone!'

Well, it's nothing major, but 'it faints you' should be 'it knocks you out' or 'it defeats you'. It just sounds weird.

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September 17, 2014 3:01:15pm
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Thanx for pointing out my gramatical mistake
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