(I think you meant Piercingstar, not Lionstrike. I think you should be a kit/apprentice, so then we're equal. =))
Shadepaw padded into camp wearily. Even if there was no battle, he was exhausted!

(No, I meant Lionstrike. =P Fine, I'll be an apprentice! X3 Do you want to name me, or can I name myself?)

Piercingstar went to her den. It was night time already! "Ugh... I'll think about everything tomorrow. Right now, I need some rest..." she curled up in her nest, sleeping happily.

(You can name it. =3)
Shadepaw went to his nest at the back of the apprentice den and fell asleep.

Pantherkit began to follow Peircingstar around camp. when Pantherkit walked away from camp, some riverclan cats were following him. When he noticed them, they pounced on him. He mewed indignantly, "I'll get you! My mommy will ruthlessly kill you all!" One of them, a grey maine coon cat,(Look it up,) slunk up to him. "Silence." He said in a cold tone, and scrached him, down to the bone. Then he roughly threw him into a tree.

(His name shall be Darkkit! And he's a black cat.)

"Mum! Mum, wake up! Pantherkit's missing!" Deerkit mewed, panicked. Fiercekit was right by her. Instantly, Piercingstar shot upwards. "Everyone, search for Pantherkit! Search for my kit!" she yowled, running up to the Highrock. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw something creep out of camp. Icepaw and Sunpaw? she thought.

you guys done a lot of writing

and royals are going to be the best clan in the futuer

(Dude, why are you talking about that and breaking the rules here?)

(I agree. Why are you doing that?)

(Let's ignore him. Btw, I meant Darkpaw. X3)

Icepaw and Sunpaw skedaddled out of camp. "Who were those cats? They just came up and took off with Pantherkit, right when we were going to bring him back to the nursery!" Sunpaw meowed. "I don't know! Maybe RiverClan?" Sunpaw gasped at Icepaw's words. "But there's a truce!" Icepaw bit back a stinging reply. "Well... Not all RiverClan cats would like the idea of a truce, nor extra help." Icepaw came to a halt. "I smell RiverClan... And Pantherkit's blood!" he shrieked silently.

(Because selfish people are like that. Darkkit is the maine coon cat right?) The Cat picked up Pantherkit, made sure he was unconcious, and threw him into the camp. Pantherkit woke to see a message put down in Raccooglyphs. (Racoon-hyroglyphs) It said; Riverclan is waiting, young one. turn to the powerfull force and we might not kill you.

P.S come to where we hurt you. We will wait until then to kill all of your family.

Pantherkit sat down and began to weep.

(Okay, so apparently he can read raccoon words? As well as RiverClan? Strange... X3)

"Icepaw, over here!" Sunpaw meowed. Icepaw dashed over to where Sunpaw had curled up next to the weeping Pantherkit. "What's wrong with him?" Icepaw hissed. Sunpaw gave him a look that just said, It's not the time for that. "Grr... We can't attack RiverClan for three Moons though..." Sunpaw gave him a cheerful glance. "That's just enough time to plot against them. Pantherkit looks okay, except..." Icepaw shivered. "Except what? Come on, spit it out!" screeched Icepaw. "Except his eyes look... Blank... Blank and dirty. I think he's gone blind."

(Niiiice! I like that.Can a medicine cat find a cure in a certain amount of time?)

"W-Who are you!? Please don't hurt me. Leave m-m-me al-l-looone!" Pantherkit cried out for his mother.

(Yes. Sunpaw might end up being like that, I'm gonna' decide soon.)

"It's okay, Pantherkit. It's Icepaw and Sunpaw. Piercingstar is worried sick about you! What happened?" Sunpaw shook her head. "Actually, nevermind about that. We need to get all this grime out of your eyes. Um... Oh! Icepaw, go to Sunning Rocks and dip some moss in the water so I can clean Pantherkit's eyes." Icepaw blinked. "But... Aren't medicine cats supposed to do that?" he asked. "Well, maybe I'm a medicine cat! This doesn't matter right now, just go get the moss!" Sunpaw's tone was stern. "Fine!" Icepaw dashed up, his paws pounding the ground loudly in anger.

"I walked away, a-and some big bobcat attacked me, and,and He killed me! But im still here and, ah!" He winced from the dirt in his eyes.